Yo, I loved this! The lyrics are so powerful! One note though, the "Player i’dn’t even played her" sample sounds like it wasn't quantized. If you recorded that sample playing live, I would suggest going in and fine tuning the notes. Idk what program you're using (maybe the one that came with your mpc?), but if you ever want help or tutorials, I'd love to help! I'm doubling down on rap/trap, and would love to work with you more. You are a great rapper!
Much love Suco, stay strong brother!