Pretty good! I feel like your melodies could have been more coherent. I can hear a few notes that sound off-scale. The piano is dark and evil. I could have cut off the tail of that kick sample (and cut off the high frequencies). Also, your bass doesn't just have to be a sine wave. You can layer another wavetable on top of it and low pass it. It'll create a much fuller sound.
Good work so far though. Keep it up!
Thank you so much for this very constructive review. As I mentionned it, it was a track that I made a long time ago, so I just added one part and uploaded it. I'll remember your advices for my next tracks ! ;)
Pretty interesting take on the original :)
I like the progression, but the drop was weak. Those drums need to be bigger, punchier. Moar bass!
Always strange when someone reviews a track that's been out for a while. But very welcome, especially from one of the greats!
Thanks for the review, I'll add punch to all things drum and bass if I ever finish this.
A bit sporadic, but pretty good I suppose :)
Needs more bass. Otherwise, great composition!
This will be done
That 808 needs to be fatter. Like morbidly obese.
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noted my friend. thanks for the review!
Pretty chill track :) Very relaxing
Thank you very much. It was a quickly-made song. I'm working on something more important now. ;)
Lol, I love the guitars! Did you use an electric piano for the bass though? xD An odd choice
hehe thanks! yeah, sometimes I structure songs with programmed piano...eventually, i'll go back and fill in with live instruments, but it helps me come back to a track months later and not have to re learn the notes i played, lol
I like it! Keep up the good work :)
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