larrynachos's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Beating The Stone]

- RRC -

This is pretty good! Try changing the velocities for each piano note. It'll sound less flat that way. I liked the progression, but I felt that it was a little too repetitive.

Nice job!

TheSubfrost responds:

I seem to have a problem with pianos, don't I? :D

Haha, thanks man!

[Phaser]

- RRC -

I'm having trouble figuring out what key you're working in. You should have had a bassline to define it. The instruments are kind of odd, but not in a bad way.

Also, I found the percussion annoying. The kick doesn't really fit, and it's all a bit too loud.

axle212 responds:

Hey!

Thanks for the response. I agree with you, I'm not really sure what direction the song is going in either. I'm just going by what I hear and if it sounds fine just going with it, which shouldn't be the case. Still trying to learn Music theory and such.

But anyways, thanks for the response and for the tips! Still trying to improve.

[Whisper (WIP)]

- RRC -

I don't really understand the progression of this song. The percussion is too loud, and the lead melody sounds offbeat and sloppy. The drop felt empty, and generally this whole song feels hollow and bland. I guess this song's concept isn't terrible, but the composition feels thrown together and sloppy.

[Subconscious]

- RRC -

This is really good! I felt the kick was a little too big, and you should try adjusting the velocities for the piano notes. Other than that, I really like it :)

TheSubfrost responds:

Great tips, thanks man! :D

[Candle by the Window]

20 seconds in and this is already in my favorites list.

God this is so beautiful. I went and listened to the original, and I just can't pick a favorite! You both have lovely voices haha ><

I'm glad that you're back, dude :)

etherealwinds responds:

You're too kiiiind. She really has a beautiful voice! I didn't want to compete, so I changed things up a little :)

Missed ya!

[Fantasiamaailma]

Wow ok have fun winning the NIM contest :<

This is too good ><

LucidShadowDreamer responds:

Hahah, thank you. We are very proud of the track, and it be amazing to win one of the 3 spots. That said, there is a lot of other competition, including your two tracks, so we'll see what the judges decide. I have a feeling that more greatness will be submitted this coming month as well!

I think that we'd be happy as long as we get the track on the album, but winning would always be an extra surprise :3

Seriously though... You've heard Mattashi's track, right? o.O

[Azezal]

I dislike the percussion, but everything else is fine :)

[Get Fabulous]

Wow, I don't see this kind of music often. A very good job!

sleepFacingWest responds:

thank you!

[Troubling Happiness]

The kick is kinda weak. Other than that, this is a sweet song!