Idk what you're talking about, dude. The vocals are awesome. Not as deep and sexy as some of the other songs, but beautiful nontheless.
Sorry to hear about your Celiac's Disease. Looking at the NGADM thread, it looks like this round was kind of a disaster. A lot of people with technical difficulties. Does that happen every year? All I did was procrastinate, so I had to compose mine entirely in like 4 hours. I also should have taken it seriously haha.
This song is incredible! I haven't had time to listen to all of the entries (I've just listened to the submissions from my favorite people), but I'm confident you can make it to the next round!