Wow, this is really great! What don't you like about it? The only thing I could even attempt to criticize is that the way the grease is dripping off the meat isn't doing a fantastic job of describing the motion of the meat. Is she rushing it to her face to avoid the grease dripping on her or the table, or is she holding it above her triumphantly before taking a bite? Maybe the grease could have been blurred or styled in a way that better communicates the speed and direction, but I'm not even capable of drawing stick figures so it feels mean or nitpicky for me to point something out. This is a fantastic piece with great colors!