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[captain syrup]

Wow, great work! I found you in the forums, look like you have a bunch of art backlogged! Can't wait to see more :D

XINOIZYS responds:

Oh hello there, nice to meet you! And thank you, really excited to get caught up here~! ^o^

[MGFS chapter 6]

One thing I'm noticing is the underdeveloped backgrounds. I think there were 5 panels in here that had any environment detail. Not to mention there's no real indications of where these events are taking place, or why these characters are connected to the same location. The story started off with a pretty solid premise, Luigi on a quest to avenge his murdered brother, that made sense. I thought the dialogue and situations were really funny too. But ever since he smoked weed the laughs got traded in for a long-winded hard to follow fight scene. I think you're trying to have a cinematic universe before establishing the universe, like if marvel released avengers endgame before iron man 1.

Keep at it!

Staplez2069 responds:

Yeah I can really see that just from going back through the comic I think I just need to develop the characters a little more instead of just having random fights just appearing out of nowhere like with Jackson's character and build up the relationships between each other and I hope I can do that in the next chapter

Thx for the great feedback man

[MGFS chapter 5]

kinda bums me out that you're not doing color anymore, I really liked that "ms paint" feel it had

Staplez2069 responds:

I'm thinking about bringing it back after the next chapter maybe it just depends I guess:)

[BW Dream Demon]

Nice work!

Icy64 responds:

Thanks!

[The boi]

I LOVE THIS AAA

Nohshy responds:

Oooooooooo thank you LarrynachosNG thank you, thank you, thank you!!

[Free commission №6]

Wow, incredible work!

PIXMAchine responds:

thank you)

[Deimos - Madness Combat]

This is really good!

LaStella responds:

TY! I'm working hard for the lights and shadows

[Ralsei]

Holy moly I love this! There's so much detail <3

CinnaBunn responds:

Thank you! Your nice comments mean a lot :''') <333

[Low Poly Noodle Girl "Min"]

This is incredible work! I'm honored to be your 200th fan!

NeonShambles responds:

Thanks man!